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[Story] Forsaken, but not Forgotten - Chapter 1: Breach of Darkness
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Morec0
Hmm, looks good. I'm looking forward to more.
And yeah, my story is excellent.
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Orranis
That's really good! I like the dialogue and how the character relationships are weird. I thought at first that "a pain in the butt" seemed too uncharacteristic (I still think that the butt was unnecessary). I love the Forsaken, especially the Forgotten Shadow cult. Only one problem. I'm not sure how big the church was in a Mage controlled city such as Dalaran. Perhaps he grew up there before moving, and wants to see it again for nostalgic undeath reasons.
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Yes, I know I'm perfect.
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Monday
Hmm, looks good. I'm looking forward to more.
And yeah, my story is excellent.
Braggart!
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Aimsyr
Looks great, you written any more?
really enjoyed reading it ;)
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