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oneforthemoney
Hmm, yes, much better.
The elbow of her left arm should angle more away from the viewer however to make it appear more natural. Don't forget fingernails unless of course she is wearing gloves. A common trick for many such as Walt Disney was giving all his cartoon characters those trademark white gloves because he disliked drawing hands.
Her left eye should not be so wide nor as high I believe if it supposed to work according to the contour of her face as her cheek seems to form along that hairline.
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Post by
Atik
I'm sure you can only improve Hyper. I'm just glad to be able to help.
The new arm looks much better. Though I can't imagine she is comfortable.
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oneforthemoney
Ah, there we are. Though it is not exactly a particularly comfortable pose as long as it is temporary for her left hand to be there she should be fine. The eyes looks much more natural now though her left shoulder should not protrude like that from beneath her... vest? Rounding off and extending slightly the connecting line between shoulder and torso so that it looks more like she is angling slightly that way may do the trick.
Her hair is a bit flat on the left side as an after effect of you redrawing it but it's not very obvious so should be fine as is.
Much better.
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oneforthemoney
Your decision of course.
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Mojoworkn
I'm not allowed to comment because I thought a woman was a man...
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oneforthemoney
It happens to the best of us (sometimes from both ends of the perspective).
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Skreeran
Oh, Skree, believe it or not Bloodmane isn't a Pinkiepie clone, she's an anti-Grakasha ponie clone. :PLol, right... :P
And are Dansha and Darrah unicorns or pegasi?
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Skreeran
Dansha is a unicorn, Darrah is a pegasi, they're physically twins but way different on the inside.Ah, okay. ;)
Just making sure nopony's making alicorns.... :P
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Behelich
What do I need to know to post as Pony-Ahanu?
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Skreeran
Morec, Horse of Rivendare
Looooooooooool
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