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denjerre
Heh, nice one again. Saw a few minor spelling mistakes, and I'd advice changing the censored word, though. Otherwise, great read.
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Patty
Thanks for pointing out the censored word, didn't think it word get censored heh.
It's quite trivial. S^&*!@#ing is another censored word. Quite annoying, really.
I enjoyed it on the whole, but you may want to reread it a couple of times on the search for typos. :)
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Morec0
Again, amazing work... I think I know why he said "he once was a crusader," (see prolouge) but I'll just have to wait and see.
Saw a few typos, nothing all that bad though, easily overlooked stuff when you're going back in and adding words. Let's hopefully see more of this in the coming days.
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Monday
I liked the story so far. The first person view and hearing his thoughts is refreshing.
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