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Azeroth 20 Years Later Chapter 1 Complete: Alliance
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Post by
Adamsm
Wow, holy cow heh, 41 posts and 312 views already, and I just put it up last night.
Does that mean I'm up there with Morec in my work heh?
Post by
Patty
Wow, holy cow heh, 41 posts and 312 views already, and I just put it up last night.
Does that mean I'm up there with Morec in my work heh?
Well, it's an idea that's been on my mind quite a bit too, so nice job. I still think it has good RP potential. ^_^
Post by
Dralas
Just read it, very good. Sounds like Azeroth, from the way they talk, is commonly accepted as a near lost place unless you're with specific people.
Still waiting to find out if Bolvar makes a grand appearance...
Post by
Skreeran
Just read it, very good. Sounds like Azeroth, from the way they talk, is commonly accepted as a near lost place unless you're with specific people.
Still waiting to find out if Bolvar makes a grand appearance...Bolvar as
orange Dr. Manhattan
Lavaman!
Post by
Adamsm
Just read it, very good. Sounds like Azeroth, from the way they talk, is commonly accepted as a near lost place unless you're with specific people.That's how it's suppose to be. If you read Wildstorm comics, think of how the world is in that; bastions of humanity trying to survive after the
Armageddon
event.
Still waiting to find out if Bolvar makes a grand appearance...I'll make a small spoiler here.... the ambassador's mentioned. Alright, spoiler over.
Post by
Dralas
Still waiting to find out if Bolvar makes a grand appearance...I'll make a small spoiler here.... the ambassador's mentioned. Alright, spoiler over.
GIMME MOAR! MOAR!
Lol, well, looking forward to the next updates.
Post by
451455
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Post by
Adamsm
Impaling his corpse outside Stormwind? Are you kidding me?
Now I am 100% sure you lied when you said you liked him.Deathwing is a @#$%. He also impaled Garrosh's corpse on the gates of Origimmar, as a warning to everyone else. If your going to demoralize someone... you do it like that.
Vancleef- Nope, he lost his head. Not to mention he is a memory.
Onyxia- I did not see her name. Memory as well.
Hammer- I don't understand what this is.Nefarion is back in Cataclysm, despite his head being turned into Stormwind all the time. Onyxia is back as well. Who's to say that the 'head of Van Cleef' wasn't just someone the Defias leader forced to pretend to be him? As for the Hammer; Twilight Hammer.
And I don't like how you are making Anduin hang out with the people who are closly related to the person who is responsible for Stormwinds fall in the first place.So he shouldn't hang out with the person who saved his life at the Theramore summit? Med'an is a good guy in my story, if you don't like that, oh well. As for the others; of course there going to band together, espically after the Destroyer's flight has been systemically tearing the world apart. As for people.... if your talking about Meryl and Maarad, neither of them have ever attacked Stormwind, and Valeera is Varian's close friend, almost like a little sister.
Other then that, you seem to have stolen much of this from The Third War. I don't like storys when everything dies in one day (Like The Third War),
I like storys more when you see everything expect the capital be lost and see the fraction try and retake thier lands from there.
As for that... it doesn't happen in one day. It's over the course of a year. As for the bolded part; I hate things like that, it's a weak plot point, that somehow, just because there are heroes they can hold the city against a massive army? I'd rather have the cities lost and at a later date they can try to reclaim it.
... Not trying to sound hatful, but... I just did not like this.
6/10
Sorry, but I never lie when I rate somthing... kind of like a Simon Cole archtype, heh... please don't get mad at me, I ran this through like ten times trying to sound as friendly as possible :(And that's your opinion. Of course, let's be honest here; you really don't like it because I killed Varian. And that's okay, that's your right.
Post by
Dralas
Oh for the love of Leeroy, not this again...
Post by
Adamsm
Heh, hey, it's his right, and compared to some of his dislike posts, that one was well written.
Post by
451455
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Post by
Adamsm
No, all criticism is welcome, good or bad.
Just FYI, killing of Garrosh only made me even more unhappy, I was hoping you could kill off Thrall or Jaina, they are the old leaders, when someone kills Varian or Garrosh, ecpisialiy at the same time, I get mad because that person is more often then not one of the many people complaining about change and loves to imagine that both Varian and Garrosh are completly hated on both sides. Anyone who ever made a RP about Garrosh and Varian killing each other at the same time fails epicly. I also doubt Varian leading a attack that stupidly, he showed in the comics, like in Ashenvale, that he knows battle planning. Just realized I didn't say anything about that heh. I didn't kill Thrall or Jaina because they were needed for what I'm planning. What wasn't, sadly, was Varian and Garrosh; they would have ended up dead at some point in those twenty years mainly because they are both hotheads. And yes, in Ashenvale he proved he could command a group... but that wasn't Varian, that was Lo'gosh, and you know how I think about that.
Of course, if you noticed, I did say that the Alliance and Horde fought back, but due to the fact that they wouldn't or couldn't give up the old hatreds and ideals, they were destroyed. So, Garrosh being Garrosh and Varian being Varian, they both felt they could do better by themselves... and they paid the price for their hubris. I didn't kill them just to kill them, I killed them for a reason.
Post by
HiVolt
Wewt for updates!
:D
Post by
Adamsm
And I don't like how you are making Anduin hang out with the people who are closly related to the person who is responsible for Stormwinds fall in the first place.Wow, mustn't have been paying attention earlier, just realized that was his standard shot at Garona lol.
Well, Dark will dislike the second chapter even more heh.
Post by
taurenmoo812
tbh I'm glad your snuffed out Garrosh and Varian in this right from the go Adam, since just getting rid of them two gets rid of the whole hotheaded horde v alliance argument from the go. Both thosr characters operate in a world of there own and I relise the idea of that happening.
Maybe your plan a final fate for Thrall and Jaina too, but least not in terms of getting rid of a bad pimple like those other two.
Post by
Adamsm
tbh I'm glad your snuffed out Garrosh and Varian in this right from the go Adam, since just getting rid of them two gets rid of the whole hotheaded horde v alliance argument from the go. Both thosr characters operate in a world of there own and I relise the idea of that happening.That's the main reason I took them both out in the first year of the conquest... I also took them out because that leaves the leaders of the humans on Anduin, Jaina, Dannath and another person, which can be a hard thing to do.
Maybe your plan a final fate for Thrall and Jaina too, but least not in terms of getting rid of a bad pimple like those other two.Sorry, can't say anything here, that would reveal too much heh.
Post by
Septimus
tbh I'm glad your snuffed out Garrosh and Varian in this right from the go Adam, since just getting rid of them two gets rid of the whole hotheaded horde v alliance argument from the go. Both thosr characters operate in a world of there own and I relise the idea of that happening.That's the main reason I took them both out in the first year of the conquest... I also took them out because that leaves the leaders of the humans on Anduin, Jaina, Dannath and another person, which can be a hard thing to do.
Maybe your plan a final fate for Thrall and Jaina too, but least not in terms of getting rid of a bad pimple like those other two.Sorry, can't say anything here, that would reveal too much heh.
Hmmm....
That's the main reason I took them both out in the first year of the conquest... I also took them out because that leaves the leaders of the humans on Anduin, Jaina, Dannath and another person, which can be a hard thing to do.
I also took them out because that leaves the leaders of the humans on Anduin, Jaina, Dannath and another personAnduin, Jaina, Dannath and another person
another person
Lavaman!
Post by
Dralas
Anduin, Jaina, Dannath and another person
another person
Lavaman!
/shoo Septimus away
It's Bolvar! I hope.
Post by
Adamsm
another personNo, it's not Bolvar. You'll find out soon who it is.
Post by
Adamsm
Part 2 is up.... and the other person has been named.
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